Script- 2nd draft

An extreme closer up of a boy putting on a ninja mask.( Background music should start now and begin to build up from here)[Cut to credit of the actor]
A long shot of the place he is going to stand in front of.
[Cut to credit of directors]
A shot of the ninja moving to his destination, taken from behind him.
[Cut to credit of another actor]
A shot of him putting down the sword(an extreme close up)
[Cut to another credit]
Shot of the ninja child, from a low angle, showing the "fight me" sign and the title of the film comes up from it.(this is the title card- music ends, and blacks out for a second before...)
Cuts to behind the child again, and camera pans to follow his movement.
Cut to a long shot of the child(maybe a sound effect of a bird cry?)
Cut to close up shot- mans feet walking quickly
The camera follows a man who appears to be going to work and is in a rush- Tracking shot of him walking.
He suddenly stops and looks confused and bewildered- close up shot
Cut to a dark figure standing still- extreme long shot
Over the shoulder shot- ninja staring at man
Cuts to a two shots of the  person walking up to the child.
Cut to midshot of the person, who looks down.
Action-reaction cut to a panning down shot which rests on the sign and sword near the ninja child's feet.
Cut back to the midshot of the man who laughs.
Cut to him picking up the mask(Framing-> Still shows the ninja child watching)
Tracking two shot from behind the ninja to see the man holding the sword.
Then a similar Track from the other direction.
Then a low angled miud-long shot as the child raises his own sword.