After showing draft three to our teacher, she told us that the order of the shots were very difficult to follow- because we had integrated the man into the opening so early, and put shots of him right next to shots of the ninja child, it would confuse the audience as to who is who. My group decided that we did still want to keep the man in the opening, however that we should change around where he was, and change the angle of the shots so that we can see his face, and therefore differentiate between him and the ninja(who would wear the mask over his face)
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