When we showed this to our teacher, she gave us some feedback on it. This storyboard was much to focused on the story and what happens next- although the storytelling was good, it has much too much happening and it didn't really set the mood for the film. It didn't give the audience any sense of character, and there was also very little detail and it didn't have very many subtle mise en scene elements incorporated, which made it bland and ineffective.
Because of this, we decided to create a new story board and add in many new scenes and shots to make the pace much slower. We also payed more attention to the props we'd use in the background, and focused less on the actions of the characters and more on smaller details in their surroundings to give a sense of the story, rather then dive right into it.
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